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Mar 12 2012 11:32am
17 year old Anna Talea asked me for a shoot a while ago. I thought I´d give her a chance. She´s got big problems with her expression I think. Even though this was merely a quick testshoot I thought I´d share anyways. I´m kinda unsatisfied about myself this time. Could have done alot better I think. Anyways, bleh:

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Mar 12 2012 11:50am
I love the atmo, not sure about the location though. Im not getting old airfield from it, just field.

Youre right though, her face is sad. Such a nice body then such a bland, expressionless face ._.

And pleeeeeease tell her to do something about her split ends, theyre killing me. Trim up the ends and do a hot oil treatment or something. Shes got all this great volume up top and then you get to the bottom and its just limp.
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Mar 12 2012 04:39pm
Quote (Xandriia @ 12 Mar 2012 13:50)
I love the atmo, not sure about the location though. Im not getting old airfield from it, just field.

Youre right though, her face is sad. Such a nice body then such a bland, expressionless face ._.

And pleeeeeease tell her to do something about her split ends, theyre killing me. Trim up the ends and do a hot oil treatment or something. Shes got all this great volume up top and then you get to the bottom and its just limp.


:rofl:
To be honest with you, at one point I wasn't sure if you were really female or just posing as one...
Now I know you have to be a woman... no man would notice hair like that!!! :evillol:

I agree with the posing, she needs to practice her expressions in front of a mirror if she has to, but she has no expression at all, just the same face with eyes looking in different directions.
She doesn't look happy, excited, sad, preoccupied, nothing. She is just looking.... at the camera :lol:
She is probably very self conscious about how she will look, but she needs to enjoy herself and have fun in front of the camera, which is not something everyone can do.
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Mar 12 2012 06:00pm
Quote (MotherOfTwo @ Mar 12 2012 04:39pm)
:rofl:
To be honest with you, at one point I wasn't sure if you were really female or just posing as one...
Now I know you have to be a woman... no man would notice hair like that!!! :evillol:

I agree with the posing, she needs to practice her expressions in front of a mirror if she has to, but she has no expression at all, just the same face with eyes looking in different directions.
She doesn't look happy, excited, sad, preoccupied, nothing. She is just looking.... at the camera :lol:
She is probably very self conscious about how she will look, but she needs to enjoy herself and have fun in front of the camera, which is not something everyone can do.


Haha :lol:

I dont get why a girl like that would be self conscious in front of the camera, shes obviously gorgeous. Youd think she would have been more into it since she asked him to do the shoot..lol.
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Mar 12 2012 06:37pm
I really like the third, but ya. did her cat get run over that day?

Xan not a girl.. LOL :blink:


I wish I could give more comprehensive critique, but I just don't know enough.

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Mar 12 2012 08:47pm
maybe, especially for the girls, it helps if I say that she had broken up with her boyfriend that day. She just told me that during the shoot, would have been a reason to delay it for me. but anyways, she just does not seem to know how her face works.
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Mar 12 2012 09:00pm
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maybe, especially for the girls, it helps if I say that she had broken up with her boyfriend that day. She just told me that during the shoot, would have been a reason to delay it for me. but anyways, she just does not seem to know how her face works.


Her mind was definitely not with you... that explains it... :(
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Mar 12 2012 11:10pm
I still prefer your old stuff marco :\
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Mar 15 2012 04:27am
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