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Jul 26 2011 06:52am
Just wanted to share some more work taken within the last few days. Sorry to hop in and out on you guys, got lots to do recently! C&C and comments are mucho <3

Will check back in a little, gonna meet a clothing designer and asking about borrowing her line for a fashion shoot this weekend. C=

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Jul 26 2011 08:11am
#1. Nuff said.

The way you shot #2 is tacky to me. #3 is tackyness defined. #4 couuld've been shot with a higher aperture - i hate how her face looks oof.
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Jul 26 2011 08:30am
Quote (onepagememory @ 26 Jul 2011 18:11)
#1. Nuff said.

The way you shot #2 is tacky to me. #3 is tackyness defined. #4 couuld've been shot with a higher aperture - i hate how her face looks oof.


same here
1 is best
2 i just dont like the props / location etc
3 i hate the shot / location (sorry to be harsh) plus the lighting on her face is bad, or did u just soften it too much?
4 like it, as omar said, little longer DoF, also show a bit more of her forehead, might hav been good with her biting her bottom lip or something???
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Jul 26 2011 11:08am
Quote (onepagememory @ Jul 26 2011 10:11am)
#1. Nuff said.

The way you shot #2 is tacky to me. #3 is tackyness defined. #4 couuld've been shot with a higher aperture - i hate how her face looks oof.


<3 It's why i put #1 at #1 ;)

I was gonna do art nudes, but #2 and #3 are so much fun to work with that i decided to do something tacky and fun. They had tons of fun tho. #2 couldn't help but to squirt everywhere with the swiffer lolol

I probably should have bump up the ISO and close down the aperture. It's really distracting outside the window and i wanted to blow it out complete hence why i used a bigger aperture.

Quote (jayandnix @ Jul 26 2011 10:30am)
same here
1 is best
2 i just dont like the props / location etc
3 i hate the shot / location (sorry to be harsh) plus the lighting on her face is bad, or did u just soften it too much?
4 like it, as omar said, little longer DoF, also show a bit more of her forehead, might hav been good with her biting her bottom lip or something???


:) I thought the scenes were perfect to tell the "story". #3's light isn't harsh. I had her hold a speedlite with a 1/2 blue gel blowing into her face to give the impression that the ipad is on and she is reading something. ;)

Agree with #4 biting her lips, that would be awesome.
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Jul 26 2011 11:15am
Quote (Eek @ 26 Jul 2011 21:08)
<3 It's why i put #1 at #1 ;)

I was gonna do art nudes, but #2 and #3 are so much fun to work with that i decided to do something tacky and fun. They had tons of fun tho. #2 couldn't help but to squirt everywhere with the swiffer lolol

I probably should have bump up the ISO and close down the aperture. It's really distracting outside the window and i wanted to blow it out complete hence why i used a bigger aperture.



:) I thought the scenes were perfect to tell the "story". #3's light isn't harsh. I had her hold a speedlite with a 1/2 blue gel blowing into her face to give the impression that the ipad is on and she is reading something. ;)

Agree with #4 biting her lips, that would be awesome.


thought that was what you wanted, but it just makes her features too flat imo, maybe it was too bright
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Jul 26 2011 11:18am
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thought that was what you wanted, but it just makes her features too flat imo, maybe it was too bright


It does kinda make her look flat :/

580EXII @ 1/128 power, wide diffuser panel on and 1/2 blue gel plus another nd gel on it. Hard to get it any dimmer.
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Jul 26 2011 11:27am
Quote (Eek @ 26 Jul 2011 21:18)
It does kinda make her look flat :/

580EXII @ 1/128 power, wide diffuser panel on and  1/2 blue gel plus another nd gel on it. Hard to get it any dimmer.


yeah aint gonna get that much lower, but try a tissue or 2 over it next time
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Jul 26 2011 12:25pm
How hard would it have been to turn the iPad on?
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Jul 26 2011 12:32pm
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How hard would it have been to turn the iPad on?


We tried it. Doesn't give the impression that it's on at all even with a bare white screen and on max brightness.
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Jul 26 2011 03:48pm
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We tried it. Doesn't give the impression that it's on at all even with a bare white screen and on max brightness.


:o What other light sources did you have besides the one on her face?
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