Just wanting some feedback from members here on my new site.

All comments and critiques are welcomed.

http://www.JohnKwokPhotography.com

http://www.JohnKwokPhotography.com/gallery.php

that link is broken.

if you open a gallery and then click gallery again = broken link


looks decent. ur pics are fantastic

your pictures are WAYY to fucking good holy shit, im sure i asked you this before but is photography ur career / job or is it just a hobby ?

Thanks!

Hm.. that's odd about the link.. afk attempting to fix it!



I dunno if i should be flattered But it's just a hobby at the moment.

Also, my site is mobile capable with iphone/ ipad etc.

And android devices.

Posting this from my phone.

on "about" section:
Several spelling / grammatical yuckies, such as the first sentence, where the two clauses should be separated by at least a ; or made into individual sentences, and the word "truely," which is a mispelled version of 'truly' and stuck out at me like a thorn.

The contact page has a photo that takes FOREVER to load.

Not sure why the 'locomotive' section is titled that way.

You out to at least include a photo of yourself in about section

Some of the flower shots don't really belong to a 'landscape' section, but should have their own section instead, as there are plenty of flower photo enthusiasts.


Great site overall! Finally, all of eek's talent into one place. Is this just for your personal showcase or do you actually intend to offer photography services from this page?


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This post was edited by onepagememory on Mar 21 2011 07:16pm

Sweet! That's nice to know



Oh damn.. i saw this coming. I suck at grammar since i never really learned it correctly :S

300fg to anyone who can help me fix all the grammatical/ spelling errors and make it sound more professional. lolol


I dunno what is wrong with the contact page.. maybe i should reduce the thumbnail image size. I only named locomotive that b/c there was a train shot in there.

I think i'll need to redo my gallery. As for the site.. it's a personal showcase for the time being until i have enough confidence to make a business model out of it.

I like watching you. Nothing wrong about that.

I'll help you with the grammar. I'm an English major