I think would look nicer with a bit of the bottom cropped off.

Please limit the size of the photos you post here, it's rather annoying to look at a photo when it barely fits on my screen.

Pretty cool

I like it a lot!

What lens did you use?

dont look at my pics in future then

i used a 90 mm tamron 1:1

My screen is more than big enough. Looks like you need to update your monitor.

As for the picture... too many blur spots imo, I don't really like it. But from what I can see, the colors are nice.

tip of ink pen should of been in focus

This.

too much blur around the red/orange imo.