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Jul 30 2009 03:53pm
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Jul 30 2009 05:24pm
let you know what ? ^^ it's common photos. nice but common :)
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Jul 30 2009 05:43pm
The first one is a bit overexposed, you should have used a smaller aperture or a faster shutter speed.

Try and crop the second one a bit so there isn't as much blank space.
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Jul 30 2009 05:48pm
I kind of like the blank space on the second one.

& yes the first one is a bit overexposed.
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Jul 30 2009 05:57pm
In the first shot its a bit over exposed as stated you could correct that with the aperture. Using your shutter speed you should have either slowed it down to create really blurry water or sped it up to stop it all together. (Note: This is in my humble oppinion.)

The second shot is fine. Its nicely composed.
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Jul 30 2009 06:15pm
Nice choc lab
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Jul 30 2009 06:28pm
I like the second one, but that grate is a bit distracting when I look at the whole thing.
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Jul 31 2009 12:11am
As everyone has stated already, the first one is over exposed... but also - I'd take a few steps back so that the whole waterfall is visible.
Cut off a bit from the top but show the bottom of the waterfall.
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Jul 31 2009 04:19am
nice dog:D
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#10
Aug 1 2009 09:22am
Quote (kratos @ Thu, Jul 30 2009, 04:43pm)
The first one is a bit overexposed, you should have used a smaller aperture or a faster shutter speed.

Try and crop the second one a bit so there isn't as much blank space.


I agree with this 100%.
Perhaps adjust the levels to try and fix the over exposure, you might have to go as far as;
editing the curves (Which is a little more difficult.)
Keep posting though, there's always room for improvement.
Take Care,
~Donny
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