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May 27 2006 12:11pm
omlouvam se za to ze to je anglicky, ale bylo to psane na jinou stranku (mnou, to zas ne ze bych to nekde kopiroval) a nejak se mi to nechce prepisovat do cestiny... takze tady to máte... další èásti dodám až je napíšu. jo a dodatek: kdo by chtel napsat "Kdo to má ku*va èíst?" at to pls nedela... vazne bych ocenil kdyby se tu ozvali jenom ti co to precetli a docetli

Prologue: Creation of Reaper

I woke up, but I felt like I haven't slept. In fact I felt like I have never slept at all. It was a strange feeling, but it was neither feeling nor scent nor view... It was a vision. No, it was not A vision it was THE Vision... I realized I haven't opened my eyes yet. I did so, but later I wished I didn't, because although I was sure I did it seemed like I didn't... ( wtf, so many did and didn't ) But suddenly The Vision came to me, I didn't see it, I felt it through my eyes. I heard Words, but not through my ears, but through my mind. The Words (mind that capital W) were like this: "I call upon you, mighty soul of Death itself, arise for I call you with offer of eternal joy" "What joy do you speak of, oh mighty Voice?" "The joy of seeing everything and everyone in the whole eternity coming to life, growing, and dying" "Such a privilege always comes with a price." "There is the only one single price which some call price and some call prize. It's a need, great need, the world cries for Death, for Death is the only purpose of the Life and Life is the only purpose of Eternity and Eternity is the only purpose of Time and Time is of no matter to you." What does that mean?" "That means, that you are the only being in Time who is about to be free..." "What do you mean by that 'is about'? What do I have to do to get Freedom?" "It's simple, yet hard to complete. First of all, you must get yourself a shape, a form, appearance, call it anyway u like, it's still the same. However, be very careful with choosing it, because it will never change. And i almost forgot, it must be something that symbolizes your 'presence' in every mortal being." "Well, I know how can that be achieved. Show me the most deadly specie that will live in whole eternity" "So be it" By simply talking these words, a blurry image of human appeared in my sight. "Very well, then my form should be like this, but without the life, only that what stays after long time of Death and after decay, that will be My form" "Well chosen" "Now you must get yourself some clothes, to cover yourself" "My clothes should consist of hood to hide my face and cloak to cover my body, both in the colour of Nothing" "Well chosen" "And now comes the most difficult part of your creation, you must choose yourself a voice and a name" "My voice shall be cold as ice but burn like hell when overheard, it shall strike to your head, pierce right to your mind, just like your voice does to me, but my voice should be much brighter, yet still shrouded in mist so that no one can be sure of what he heard yet be terribly sure about the meaning. And as for the name, show me how will the most noble hunter scare his pray." "Very well" Image of Lion appeared and suddenly he turned around and made a noise "Roooaar" "Hmm that's helpful, but not exactly of what I thought about. Let's change it a bit" "What tool in the life of a human will be used as a weapon?" "It will be called Scythe, it will be used for reaping the grain" "Reaping? Sounds...interesting, I shall be called Reaper then" "Very well and now we get to your purpose... You will be the one who will help every being in Eternity to cross the border between Life an Death" "Oh my Voice, what a terrible purpose I have. However I'm willing to accept it in case I will be free" "You will. However there is a test, you must pass before you can become 'Reaper'. It is part of your purpose, in fact it's needed just to show that you are ready." "Ok tell me what should I do." "To finally become free, to become the 'Reaper' and to become the Emperor of Life and Ally of Death you must slay two certain beings." "Who do I have to kill?" "At first, Me, your creator, The Voice." "How can that be done?" "You will have to find yourself a way. And it's even more difficult than this." "How can it be even more difficult?" "It's simple. It's because second one you must slay is You..."

This post was edited by MrReaper on May 27 2006 12:16pm
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May 27 2006 12:20pm
tohle je uplne strasna nekonecna veta smile.gif

he world cries for Death, for Death is the only purpose of the Life and Life is the only purpose of Eternity and Eternity is the only purpose of Time and Time is of no matter to you.

Musim rict, ze ten anglicky sloh neni nic moc, ale sam bych to nezvladl jinak...

Byt to cesky, mohlo by si to tu precist o hodne vic lidi ... smile.gif

Jo, a jeste neco.. ta vsuvka v zavorce zbytecne lame atmosferu toho pribehu.... Jestlize to potrebuje odlehcit, mel bys to udelat nejakym setrnejsim zpusobem... wink.gif

Jinak jako prolog dobry, celkove bych to ohodnotil tak 6/10 .... (nejaky minusy za tu ingliš, dalsi ze to je jeden flak textu, malinky naformatovani toho by pomohlo, a dalsi minusy za to, ze mi tu rusis fan fiction monopol.. tongue.gif )
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May 27 2006 12:27pm
nj ingliš tak sry, ale trenuju na certifikatni zkousky wink.gif a pokud jde o anglicky sloh tak to vypiluju, a ono ten sloh se ti taky trochu nezda kvuli toho formatovani a kvuli toho ze za uvozovky nepisu kdo to rekl... psal jsem to vcera v jednu rano uplne na srot, takze me snad omluvite wink.gif jinak myslim ze i tu anglictinu tady vetsina prelouska, kdyz bude chtit, mno a kdyz ne tak mam smulu...
formatovany to bylo, ale pri tom copy/paste se to nejak zlomilo...
na monopol ti kaslu wink.gif
btw vis jakou to da praci vymyslettakhle dlouhe souveti?
s tou zavorkou mas asi pravdu, budu se toho pro priste vyvarovat

edit: jo a dik za kritiku (predevsim proto ze byla konstruktivni a byl jsi napomocny) a za to zes to precetl wink.gif

This post was edited by MrReaper on May 27 2006 12:28pm
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May 27 2006 01:01pm
Jo celkem nice reape ale jedina pripominka:jde na tom videt ze si to psal na srot je to takove ozralecko depresivni biggrin.gif
btw na jake zkousky se pripravujes?
Ja jdu v sobotu na prvni cast F.C.E(first certificate english)-listening,speaking
tak mi drz palce biggrin.gif
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May 27 2006 01:07pm
jo Palce presne to jsou ony FCE wink.gif
nebyl jsem nasrot z chlastu, byl jsem nasrot z tezkeho nedostatku spanku, protoze jsem celej tyden skoro probdel ph34r.gif
a depresivni to ma byt, prece nebudu psat o Smrtce co pobiha na louce plne kyticek wink.gif
edit: ne Quinny NEBUDU psat o smrtakovi co pobiha na louce plne kyticek, tohle ma byt temny pribeh a takovej proste bude

This post was edited by MrReaper on May 27 2006 01:17pm
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May 27 2006 01:16pm
osobne by mi to treba libilo...
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May 27 2006 01:31pm
teda ale nazev me dozrazil nemelom se to jmenovat reapuv +1? wink.gif nebo spis +xxxxx
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May 27 2006 01:35pm
Luo od tebe jsem OT cekal, ani nevim proc... ale vidim ze jsem mel pravdu... dalsi OT si pls odpust, jsou tu nekteri ktere tenhle topic zajima (minimalne palec a quinny)
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May 28 2006 06:00am
hele sry for ot ale nevim kam sem mel slehnout svuj 700 posts tak to davam k tobe

....mam 700 posts xDDD hura
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May 28 2006 06:02am
Quote (Lua @ Sun, May 28 2006, 12:00pm)
hele sry for ot ale nevim kam sem mel slehnout svuj 700 posts tak to davam k tobe

....mam 700 posts xDDD hura


borec ;p
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