You've decided to explore the possibility of imports of silk fabrics from Pakistan to Britain. You write therefore an inquiry to LakhanySilkMills@lakhany.com to inquire about product assortment, pricing, and payment and delivery terms.

Write e-mail in English and use all of the following words and phrases.
The words / phrases to be used as they are, but you are allowed to change the order and write them with capital letters.
In your answer you must highlight the terms used.
Scope: 50-100 words

assortment

supply

quantity discount

catalogue

look forward to

bank transfer

consider

consequently


Ill donate to the guy which are aviailable

Hope anyone can do it


This post was edited by Borki on May 22 2014 01:30am

I'd make them all questions and make it generic

To whom it may concern,

I have been looking through your catalogue and your assortment of products is quite enticing. I am starting to import silk products and I have a few questions before we go further; do you have a large supply on hand? If so, would you consider offering me a quantity discount? I got scammed a few months ago in a business deal; consequently, I only use bank transfers.

I look forward to hearing from you,
Xxx



Okay I think I fixed the punctuation commas and everything else

This post was edited by brigadier on May 22 2014 02:30am

Dear xyx,
I have seen your assortment in your online catalogue and have been pleased with what i saw,
consequently i do consider ordering a substantial supply of goods from you.
Could you please advise what quantity discounts you give and also if you accept bank transfer as payment method.
I look forward to your response.
Greetings abc

(just over 50 words )

I would give this about a B- as far as overall grammar correctness. There are at least 5 mistakes. :x

Edited:

Dear ____,
I have seen the assortment of goods in your online catalogue, and I am interested in some of the products. Consequently, I am looking for large amounts. In order to consider ordering from you, I must know what quantity discounts you offer and if you have the supply for all of my needs. In addition, I need to know if you accept bank transfer as a payment method. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
______

79 words.

This post was edited by Barcelona1011 on May 22 2014 11:36am

Maybe a c