I've written a novel review of the Da Vinci code.

I could use a second opinion about my work, and some constructive criticism. So I'm looking for someone who is good at the English language and grammar, who could tell me if I've messed up anywhere.


Thanks in advance!

can do this for a small fee.

I've got zero forum gold and I'd like it to stay that way.

I should have added what I usually do to the initial post: Do not write if you're looking to net a sum of FG, I help others out of free will, that's what I'm hoping to get in return.

good on you to tell him off
he just posting something like "gimme gold" on all forums he can
would help you but have neither read nor watched the 'da vinci code'