Anyone have the time to proofread one of my writing assignments?

It's based on history, I'm just seeing if there's any grammar errors or any different approaches of explaining certain things to make it better.
(Be cool too if you know a bit of the history I'm learning, textbook is above my current grade level, so it's a bit hard to understand.)

This post was edited by Sefira on Sep 26 2013 05:56pm

1. how long?
2. what history?

Just two questions, about a page/half, and it's based on excerpts of world travelers/feudalism from 11-15th centuries C.E.

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btw, the feudalism texts are from the 9th century