Was wondering if anyone would want to check out this particular report and offer ideas or suggestions on how to expand it out so that I can have one more full page. I have literally thought and covered every element of film design that I can possibly think of i.e.

lighting
sound
camera effects/angel
actors
etc etc

http://pastebin.com/kDUUuqcJ (this is the link to what i have so far)

Shorter paragraphs, which means breaking them up.

Find sources to quote about the directors and other people.

And remember the golden rule of padding: Every paragraph ends with just a little bit on the next line.

lol

is music included in sound? (sorry I don't know much about this topic)