Quote (Jephree @ Jun 7 2013 10:47am)
Try not to use the words, "You, we, your, etc." This causes the essay to be personalized to the reader.
Example:
Bad: The author then continued to explain, that you are unable to attain higher intelligence as a human.
Good: The author then continued to explain, that one cannot simply attain a higher intelligence as a human.
Apparently your genius doesn't transfer to writing. Using "one" is one of the better ways to come across as stuffy and awkward. A much better way of putting that sentence is:
The author then added that humans simply cannot attain higher intelligence.
Fewer words, too.