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May 3 2013 10:31am
Ran into this while proofreading and it looks weird

Transition, clause, conjunction clause.
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May 3 2013 08:25pm
First of all, what the heck is a Grammar geek?
Second of all... what are you asking? Is what correct?
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May 3 2013 08:34pm
Quote (simpleforce @ May 3 2013 08:25pm)
First of all, what the heck is a Grammar geek?
Second of all... what are you asking? Is what correct?


However, blah blah blah, for blah blah blah.

That help?
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May 3 2013 08:49pm
Tim, this doesn't make any since.

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May 3 2013 11:04pm
Quote (Applecrack @ May 3 2013 08:34pm)
However, blah blah blah, for blah blah blah.

That help?


doesn't make sense. there's no subject or verb in that sentence
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May 3 2013 11:05pm
Quote (Applecrack @ May 4 2013 02:31am)
Ran into this while proofreading and it looks weird

Transition, clause, conjunction clause.


Transition, clause or conjunction clause?
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May 4 2013 04:24am
Quote (Applecrack @ 4 May 2013 03:34)
However, blah blah blah, for blah blah blah.

That help?


Just post the actual sentence...
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May 4 2013 08:00am
Meanwhile, Daniel cried, because he sharted.

Is that an example of what you mean?
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May 4 2013 12:50pm
Quote (hedonism @ May 4 2013 08:00am)
Meanwhile, Daniel cried, because he sharted.

Is that an example of what you mean?


ye
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May 4 2013 07:22pm
Quote (Applecrack @ May 4 2013 11:50am)
ye


remove the 2nd comma
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