its my final essay. please pm me. i will send the essay through email, so you can open it through word. my teacher remarked that i have too many grammatical errors, word choices, and no clarity. she also wants me to expand introduction and include more support. I would also like any tips on counterarguments.

I will gladly help, either post it here or PM me please.

Hello there,

I would be willing to look over your essay and make some general comments on it. I will not be able to edit it, but if I see some reoccurring issues I will make note of it and provide some examples to correct the mistake(s). Since there are a lot of different ways to approach organizing a paper, I will wait to read over yours until commenting on counter arguments. Just send me contact information if you feel comfortable doing that.