Lay off the text, it just ruins the whole thing if you don't use it properly
don't have much else to say on it, I'm sure others will point out many other things that are wrong with it
just keep following tutorials and you'll get better

awesome thank you.

great sig man, keep at it

Yea typography is hugely important with any sig. It can completely ruin a sig if done poorly. I'm still bad at it myself but at least I'm better then i used to be