the hardcore signature makers would frown on this,..
Personally i think it looks good, and what ever one person makes is a masterpiece of their own creation, however,. the foreground font has no depth and does not work well with the image, in terms of lightness.
also the background text looks like hex code rather then matrix 101010101.
What program are you working with?
ps. don't let my msg get you down, keep practicing and try different things!