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Jul 5 2012 06:34pm
here are afew drawings of mine on devart,

wanted some criticism or something maybe even suggestions for new projects lmk..

all of the sketches were done under an hour so maybe i should slow down a bit =/

http://kraziedave.deviantart.com/gallery/
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Jul 6 2012 06:23am
Just by going with what you provided, it's somewhat difficult to honestly know where you're at.

The proportions and anatomy could use some work. I would highly recommend to look at some Andrew Loomis or William Hogarth books - if you're interested in anatomy. Even if you aren't interested in it, it would still be good practice and help you fine tune some of your work. You'll also want to begin working on your line work some - try to do confident lines the first try. In addition, revisiting basic shapes and practicing them will greatly help.

On a side note, you can post your daily sketches here: http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=45108511
You'll be able to get some more direct feedback from more experienced artists :p
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Jul 6 2012 05:15pm
Quote (Fault @ Jul 6 2012 05:23am)
Just by going with what you provided, it's somewhat difficult to honestly know where you're at.

The proportions and anatomy could use some work. I would highly recommend to look at some Andrew Loomis or William Hogarth books - if you're interested in anatomy. Even if you aren't interested in it, it would still be good practice and help you fine tune some of your work. You'll also want to begin working on your line work some - try to do confident lines the first try. In addition, revisiting basic shapes and practicing them will greatly help.

On a side note, you can post your daily sketches here: http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=45108511
You'll be able to get some more direct feedback from more experienced artists :p


thanks so much for the feedback and also that link =D
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Jul 9 2012 03:25pm
Slowing down would be nice. I draw from looking at pictures in about an hour so I mean it's easy to do that

But those are pretty good, I can't draw off a blank page. Slow it down and re-post, maybe more likes :D

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