hey i finanlly made my first brushed sig and i wanted some experienced feed back on it. lmk what you guys think of this. it was all done on photoshop

Clouds could use more filling, as they are only contours atm.
Give it more depth with use of shadows, as it looks very flat.
And you need to work a bit on details, such as faces

thats what i was thinking too but then i saw he submitted it for a sig request while i was trolling request section :\