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Erase the dots on his face

Looks blurry and text is hard to read

the render is badly cutted off (or whats the word for it xD?)
also that text is hard to read and imo yellow isnt that good colour for such render ^^
and you havent done much to the sig :/ read some tutorials and you will improve

2 minutes to make that

i like the borderless look but the sparkles ruin it for me try another approach 3/10

I agree with most of the other suggestions here, I think if you change the font colour to black And/Or pick a new font, Remove the dots from around his shoulders/head so it looks like the sparkle is looping around him.

The Render is choppy,
text is hard to read,
Yellow dots over the render make it look silly,
Looks like somebody just pasted a render and put some dots in and some text.