Yeah, i mean, i appreciate how time-consuming it is going through stuff slowly and with every detail (after making a couple tuts myself), especially on a whole sig, but it is quite hard to follow for someone who doesn't already know what your on about, and pretty much knows it anyway (in which case they wouldn't be reading the tut)....
So yeah, simplicity and meticulous steps, (though boring) are the key to a good tut...
Apart from that, nice ideas and nice work