can some1 help me improve this?

first time makin sigs

thanks

Well , did you use the render as the bg?

Otherwise, I kinda like small text on big text.

The render seem to be blended correctly (Base on the color I mean) but maybe you could add some more effect around the focal point. Work with your flow. Flow is , basically, the way the sig seem to go.

Agreed.

Also you may want to reduce the text size down alot. At least half the size, and take the 'outa glow' off from around the outside of the font as it makes it look to blury as the colours are similer.