Ye, it was a quick follow through, i might have missed something

I just followed the smudging and most of the colouring, wrap, etc, because other things its just how I normally do it

Also, meh like big light source, i prob overdone that a little bit though.
I didn't really like the outcome of yours, the effects is nice, but it looks a bit over contrasted, over burned, etc.
But I do like your current, its awesome