Quote (AWER @ Jul 26 2011 08:36pm)
Here is my attempt with your tut
Skipped some steps and added a bit of my own flavor, let me know what I can improve etc.
Thanks

http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/1457/smudgesane.png
Not bad for a first try.
Here are the main flaws:
- The tag has no flow.
- You overdid it with the C4D effects.
- The C4D effects seem to be rather randomly placed, which can disturb the flow even more. When you add C4D effects to create some more details, make sure they don't ruin but enhance the flow.