Quote (Panic_Fails_at_Diablo @ May 14 2011 01:25pm)
Actually, both of your fixes are wrong. Your first fix implies that the game can change its own ranking system, and your second fix is just grammatically incorrect on a few different levels.
The first one I wrote is perfectly fine for someone literate. Whether it's grammatically correct or not..
It's structure allows for the reader to actually read.. I was only writing it differently to show how whack this kid is at putting sentences together..
Unless you're a 10yo little boy from France, it's hard to comprehend what he's saying.
Whether or not it implies anything is irrelevant.. SHOULD REACH HAVE ITS?! I dunno.. should it?
The second sentence is actual complied very nice. Some punctuation might be a little misplaced being GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT, but I did it that way because That's how I want it to sound when someone is saying it. I mean it's the same way 99.99% of Authors who are writing Fiction books would write...
They use punctuation however they want to exercise the diversity in their style of writing. I shall punctuate how I wish to punctuate!
MUAH HAHAHAHA/THREAD!
E: When did the halo forum become about correcting people's grammar and sentences all the time?
It's nearly all I see anymore.. I wasn't trying to correct what he was saying or askzing, I was just makzing it easier to understand.
Whether or not it's politically/grammatically correct.. I couldz careee, thee fuckz lessssees.
This post was edited by silverskating31 on May 14 2011 03:53pm