I'm wondering how i did, for those who read manga that is. I personally think i might have removed to much detail, but lmk anyway.

Befor/After



This post was edited by serpin on May 2 2015 07:06am

4/5 bottom panel is somewhat weird

Bottom panel is missing the mountains and the lack of background is really killing it.

I agree i must have removed to much detail, thanks for the feedback.

i'd still read it

Readable and I wouldnt blame you for lack of detail.
If this was lets say one punchman

I would bitch at you for slacking on the quality

haha. Well ill work more on it this was after all my first one, ill post something up again.

ok lmk

Before/After

Nice job bro