Quote (Naota @ Sat, Sep 12 2009, 02:26pm)
Ya i knew there was something off with it and i thought it was the flowers but this is what it looks like without flowers.. i asked person 2 remove that layer lol
Though it might of been the greay areas that were throwing me off instead.
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd68/gener8ion/Naotafin.jpg
i like it more without the flowers
but i think the grey areas are still bad
if it was me i'ld put dark layers of almost black - Red on blend mode overlay on top of them just to keep the texture play with that for a sec then i would smudge the bottom right up so it wasn't so rando cornered and so the depth matched the top/left remove the lens flare (maybe brush stamp idk) on his sword and remake it so it looked more like a glare with angled lines coming out probably using motion blur erased a bit and faded w/ linear dodge repeat opposite angle a erase the grey that sits on his face and go in with a small brush on the hair, face and sword and brush some black on lower fill if necessary and put on soft light or overlay then maybe do an apply image layer motion blur it and angled strokes it change to multiply and erase everything but the horizon to make a grassy look and maybe do some hard smudging over there then maybe some touch up with a bright orange/black gradient map on saturation lowered fill like 40% and an aqua under deep yellow under warming photofilters maybe
got a little carried away there
one helluva compound sentence