current is just a manga crop

it fit what i asked, literally. i wasn't expecting anything fancy, just basic stuff with the girl thrown in. so i'm happy.

i rly like that design
but it looks incomplete a lot was left unchanged idk if that works real well w/ action like that

Way too much happening. That and it looks like you did a few rectangle clipping masks and they dont fit too well. The stuff on the left is way too distracting and taking away from the focal.

i was trying to do something that fit spikes character
he isn't really the focal type i didn't really want him to be the center of all attention
i guess it didn't work out that well

This post was edited by flapel on Apr 12 2009 06:56am

Little too much goin on, it does help him blend but, little overboard :/

Not bad.

This post was edited by Teh_Pker on Apr 12 2009 03:48pm

i rather like your current it has a nice texture

Thanks, I still feel there's a few fixtures/ small things I could have done diff to make it look pro but, after like what 6 fails I thought better not mess with the outcome for now.