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Aug 8 2009 06:48pm
Quote (Instigator @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 07:46pm)
even less believable for Bleach



it was interesting don't get me wrong, but that's like 4 chapters worth of stuff, gotta make em more believable -_-


I'v just resigned myself to never believing anything posted by epion :( Even if his story ideas are awesome.


but actually this one was kinda cheesy adn not believable. I wouldn't want this actually in bleach even if it was an entertaining read.
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Quote (Instigator @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 08:46pm)
even less believable for Bleach



it was interesting don't get me wrong, but that's like 4 chapters worth of stuff, gotta make em more believable -_-


I'm sick of shitty chapters.. so I WRITE MAH' OWN!!


Fuck Kubo.


Quote (Thor123422 @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 08:48pm)
I'v just resigned myself to never believing anything posted by epion :( Even if his story ideas are awesome.


but actually this one was kinda cheesy adn not believable. I wouldn't want this actually in bleach even if it was an entertaining read.


Cheesy?!?!? lol :cry:

updated it below :D

This post was edited by Epion on Aug 8 2009 06:52pm
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Chapter 370 -- The Crimson Lycan (39 pages)

Stark is on the cover page with the words: His strength is fueled by emptiness!!

The chapter begins with Stark speaking to Lilynette. He asks her if she is ready to transform and feed, seeing that Barragan was defeated. Lilynette agrees that they must.
Stark holds Lilynette above his left shoulder -- Resurrección Segunda!! "Transfórmese!! Banquetee en muerte y vida" (Second Resurrection!! Transform!! Feast on death and life).

Immense spiritual pressure fills the entire area. Aizen is surprised for the first time in the history of bleach... "a second resurrection?...."

The chapter shifts to Hachi and Soi Fon. The Smoke from Soi Fon's attack clears, and the barrier dissolves. Barragan's skull is shown completely shattered. He can barely speak, but congratulates
them on their combined victory. Barragan explains that he is the oldest of the Espada, and that the Hōgyoku was not used on him, and that he tore his mask from his body without Aizen's aid. Barragan
states that he is one of two Vasto Lordes within the Espada ranks, and that Aizen has managed to collect three others stronger than himself, above the current Espada.

Hachi and Soi Fon are shocked that he is revealing so much information, and ask him why he has done so. Barragan asks them if they know why he wears this crown. Soi Fon and Hachi remain silent.

Before he can speak, a giant clawed hand appears above his head, and shatters his skull into pieces.
The chapter displays a two page colored picture of Stark in his second form.

I'll describe this as best I can:

Stark is a giant werewolf, with two horns pointing directly horizontal, extending from each side of his head. His hollow hole is in the center of his forehead, surrounded by a dark circle, then an even darker
circle. His fangs are enormous, and extend to the middle of his chest. His hands are enormous in size and from the center of each hand extends a long, sword-like weapon. He has three tales, with a series of jewelry on each one. His eyes glow black, and his mask is nowhere to be found. On his chest is an Ouroboros (this is a symbol representing cyclicality, and continuance). His fur is completely red, and his teeth are ash-black.

Stark explains that his way of death, as explained by Barragan, is stronger than death itself because he can consume both death and life (referring to hollow and shinigami). He grasps the body of Barragan
with a single hand, and begins to consume him. His fangs pierce through Barragan's body and he is absorbed completely.

Stark: "To be powerful is to be alone."

/Chapter End
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Aug 8 2009 07:00pm
Quote (Epion @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 04:52pm)
Chapter 370 -- The Crimson Lycan (39 pages)

Stark is on the cover page with the words: His strength is fueled by QQ!!

The chapter begins with Stark speaking to Lilynette. He asks her if she is ready to strip and feed, seeing that Barragan was ass raped. Lilynette agrees that they must.
Stark holds Lilynette above his left nut -- Resurrección Segunda!! "Transfórmese!! Banquetee en muerte y vida" (Second Resurrection!! Transform!! Feast on death and life).

Immense spiritual pressure fills the entire area. Aizen is not surprised for the first time in the history of bleach... "a second resurrection?...."

The chapter shifts to Hachi and Soi Fon. The Smoke from Soi Fon's attack clears, and the barrier dissolves. Barragan's penis is shown completely shattered. He can barely speak, but congratulates
them on their combined victory. Barragan explains that he is the oldest of the Espada, and that the Hōgyoku was not used on him, and that he tore his mask from his body without Aizen's aid. Barragan
states that he is one of two Vasto Lordes within the Espada ranks, and that Aizen has managed to collect three others stronger than himself, above the current Espada.

Hachi and Soi Fon are shocked that he is revealing so much skin, and ask him why he has done so. Barragan asks them if they know why he wears this crown. Soi Fon and Hachi remain silent.

Before he can speak, a giant clawed hand appears above his head, and shatters his skull into pieces.
The chapter displays a two page colored picture of Stark in his second form.

I'll describe this as best I can:

Stark is a giant werewolf, with two horns pointing directly horizontal, extending from each side of his head. His hollow hole is in the center of his forehead, surrounded by a dark liquid, then an even darker
liquid. His fangs are enormous, and extend to the middle of his chest. His hands are enormous in size and from the center of each hand extends a long, sword-like weapon. He has three cocks, with a series of jewelry on each one. His eyes glow black, and his mask is nowhere to be found. On his chest is an Ouroboros (this is a symbol representing cyclicality, and continuance). His fur is completely red, and his teeth are ash-black.

Stark explains that his way of death, as explained by Barragan, is stronger than death itself because he can consume both death and life (referring to hollow and shinigami). He grasps the body of Barragan
with a single ..., and begins to consume him. His fangs pierce through Barragan's ... and he is absorbed completely.

Stark: "To be powerful is to be alone." <-- no need to change that imo. who isn't powerful when they're lonely.

/Chapter End

Revised. Lmk. Find all the changes, it's a fun game. Epion, don't think i didn't like your story, but i couldn't resist changing it up a bit.
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Quote (Epion @ Sun, Aug 9 2009, 02:52am)
Chapter 370 -- The Crimson Lycan (39 pages)

Stark is on the cover page with the words: His strength is fueled by emptiness!!

The chapter begins with Stark speaking to Lilynette. He asks her if she is ready to transform and feed, seeing that Barragan was defeated. Lilynette agrees that they must.
Stark holds Lilynette above his left shoulder -- Resurrección Segunda!! "Transfórmese!! Banquetee en muerte y vida" (Second Resurrection!! Transform!! Feast on death and life).

Immense spiritual pressure fills the entire area. Aizen is surprised for the first time in the history of bleach... "a second resurrection?...."

The chapter shifts to Hachi and Soi Fon. The Smoke from Soi Fon's attack clears, and the barrier dissolves. Barragan's skull is shown completely shattered. He can barely speak, but congratulates
them on their combined victory. Barragan explains that he is the oldest of the Espada, and that the Hōgyoku was not used on him, and that he tore his mask from his body without Aizen's aid. Barragan
states that he is one of two Vasto Lordes within the Espada ranks, and that Aizen has managed to collect three others stronger than himself, above the current Espada.

Hachi and Soi Fon are shocked that he is revealing so much information, and ask him why he has done so. Barragan asks them if they know why he wears this crown. Soi Fon and Hachi remain silent.

Before he can speak, a giant clawed hand appears above his head, and shatters his skull into pieces.
The chapter displays a two page colored picture of Stark in his second form.

I'll describe this as best I can:

Stark is a giant werewolf, with two horns pointing directly horizontal, extending from each side of his head. His hollow hole is in the center of his forehead, surrounded by a dark circle, then an even darker
circle. His fangs are enormous, and extend to the middle of his chest. His hands are enormous in size and from the center of each hand extends a long, sword-like weapon. He has three tales, with a series of jewelry on each one. His eyes glow black, and his mask is nowhere to be found. On his chest is an Ouroboros (this is a symbol representing cyclicality, and continuance). His fur is completely red, and his teeth are ash-black.

Stark explains that his way of death, as explained by Barragan, is stronger than death itself because he can consume both death and life (referring to hollow and shinigami). He grasps the body of Barragan
with a single hand, and begins to consume him. His fangs pierce through Barragan's body and he is absorbed completely.

Stark: "To be powerful is to be alone."

/Chapter End


Starrk can't have second form..

i'd consider it cheating coz #4 espada said he is the only espada who could reach it.

and I want to believe Ulquiorra <_<
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Aug 8 2009 07:05pm
Quote (greydoom @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 09:00pm)
Starrk can't have second form..

i'd consider it cheating coz #4 espada said he is the only espada who could reach it.

and I want to believe Ulquiorra <_<


If it was a secret for Ulq... it can be a secret for the top 3 as well ;)

We don't know :D
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Aug 8 2009 07:09pm
Quote (Epion @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 08:05pm)
If it was a secret for Ulq... it can be a secret for the top 3 as well ;)

We don't know :D


I doubt it, top 3 are special aizen butt buddies after all :)
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Aug 8 2009 07:14pm
Quote (Thor123422 @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 06:59pm)
I didn't change the subject, i was saying he hasn't had a fight ywet where we can judge his fighting abilities straight up.  Since he got butt raped by uryuu in god mode and the only other fight we have seen him in was a sciencey fight.


yes, you added the unnecessary 2nd part and changed the subject to that of their fight.
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Aug 8 2009 07:15pm
Quote (Epion @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 07:39pm)
Chapter 370 -- The Crimson Lycan (39 pages)

Stark is on the cover page with the words: His strength is fueled by emptiness!!

The chapter begins with Stark speaking to Lilynette. He asks her if she is ready to transform and feed, seeing that Barragan was defeated. Lilynette agrees that they must.
Stark holds Lilynette above his left shoulder -- Resurrección Segunda!! "Transfórmese!! Banquetee en muerte y vida" (Second Resurrection!! Transform!! Feast on death and life).

Immense spiritual pressure fills the entire area. Aizen is surprised for the first time in the history of bleach... "a second resurrection?...."

The chapter shifts to Hachi and Soi Fon. The Smoke from Soi Fon's attack clears, and the barrier dissolves. Barragan's skull is shown completely shattered. He can barely speak, but congratulates
them on their combined victory. Barragan explains that he is the oldest of the Espada, and that the Hōgyoku was not used on him, and that he tore his mask from his body without Aizen's aid. Barragan
states that he is one of two Vasto Lordes within the Espada ranks, and that Aizen has managed to collect three others stronger than himself, above the current Espada.

Hachi and Soi Fon are shocked that he is revealing so much information, and ask him why he has done so. Barragan asks them if they know why he wears this crown. Soi Fon and Hachi remain silent.

Before he can speak, a giant clawed hand appears above his head, and shatters his skull into pieces.
The chapter displays a two page picture of Stark in his second form.

I'll describe this as best I can:

Stark is a giant werewolf, with two horns pointing directly horizontal, extending from each side of his head. His hollow hole is in the center of his forehead, surrounded by a dark circle, then an even darker
circle. His fangs are enormous, and extend to the middle of his chest. His hands are enormous in size and from the center of each hand extends a long, sword-like weapon. He has three tales, with a series of jewelry on each one. His eyes glow, and his mask is nowhere to be found. On his chest is an Ouroboros (this is a symbol representing cyclicality, and continuance).

Stark explains that his way of death, as explained by Barragan, is stronger than death itself because he can consume both death and life (referring to hollow and shinigami). He grasps the body of Barragan
with a single hand, and begins to consume him. His fangs pierce through Barragan's body and he is absorbed completely.

Stark: "To be powerful is to be alone."

/Chapter End


nice prediction......
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Aug 8 2009 07:16pm
Quote (Instigator @ Sat, Aug 8 2009, 07:38pm)
though he did ez the sciency guy where uryuu couldn't in his new ezpk mode -_-


actually, science guy kept healing lol and negated their attacks, yet uryuu still managed to critically damage him with his star thing.
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