Quote (Eep @ Jan 23 2010 12:24am)
I cannot read or review any sort of poem or lyrics that people make, I don't know why.
I can't associate with what they are feeling or what they are trying to say generally. Trying to interpret just isn't my thing when it comes to stuff like that....
but +1 for actually doing it....I'm sure some honest person out there can discuss it with you
the point in responding isn't to understand what someone is trying to say
If all you had to say was I get it, i would be disappointed i was just curious what you thought about how i organized those words on that page anything is fine, like:
I dont understand this convoluted garbage
or
Why does it end with a comma
or
The entire thing makes you sound like a cocky pretentious dickwad living so his worthless existence could fail in another field which he insults with an unsophisticated lack of talent attempting to mascaraed itself as freeform: go die you trash