Hello guys!

I'm doing this post production work for a short story i created using recordings from ingame World of Warcraft.
Basically i've done the whole thing from scratch however i've used some royalty free samples but i've had to pitch shift and mix in those as well.

I'd like some feedback on the production if possible, im aware that the story-line isnt that good but i kind of just needed something to work on and i wanted to make as much of it myself as possible.

Don't hold back, any comment is valuable as long as its within reason

Thanks.

@0:34-0:42 when you said he specialized in "outdoor mining, indoor mining etc" the imagery didn't line up with the narration. The depictions of each act went by faster than the words were said, making it seem jumbled. It caught up and lined up by the rat killing the but middles actions didn't work

Don't show the instant he summons/leaves his mount. Find some footage of a stable or something to make it seem like a more natural transition.

The camera angles in the intro were really good, but it seems like you got lazy after that and spent too many consecutive seconds in first person view. change it up more when he's running around the forest/jungle

The narrator sounded like a commie. You should hire Laurence Fishburn to do a John Madden impression and present the story that way.

This post was edited by kayeto on Apr 4 2015 05:45pm

Thanks you so much for ur opinion!

I'm kind of in no position to change the video at this stage as my assignment is due in 2 weeks and that would mean to redo or introduce new scenes that would need sounds and or music over and i dont have the time for that at the moment. I'm mostly interested in people's opinion on the sound for the video as im doing a music tech course. Im sry for not making that too clear in the post.

however i've been planning to change the narration for the section that u mention with the listing of things. i need to rerecord that cos i cant stretch the recording to fit scene changes properly without destroying the sound of it.

Again thanks for ur opinion, much appreciated!

This post was edited by luckspin on Apr 4 2015 09:34pm