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Apr 12 2013 02:13pm



Hello, looking for feedback (lighting, ADR, characters, etc ) So, check out our SHORT FILM that we did (idea-prepro-pro-post) in 3 days! Comments appreciated on the YouTube page! Check out the girl that plays downstairs with Hades at 4:17! (Comedy Film Noir) Feel free to Share!
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Apr 13 2013 02:00am
Acting is pretty cartoonishly over the top in both styles. Often you are kind of just reading the lines and not saying meaning it.
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Apr 14 2013 11:30am
Quote (BebebBurns @ Apr 13 2013 08:00am)
Acting is pretty cartoonishly over the top in both styles. Often you are kind of just reading the lines and not saying meaning it.



^ i got the impression it was meant to be forced..

anyway short was ok - i liked the camera work/clicky noises when jake was locking up his bike
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Apr 14 2013 12:42pm
Quote (WelSh @ Apr 14 2013 07:30pm)
^ i got the impression it was meant to be forced..


Meta that, forced in forcedness at times, not talking just about the noir part but the first scene too.

Not saying it's bad.
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