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Mar 27 2015 10:01am
https://soundcloud.com/augustd93/mystery-of-time

Still have to sidechain the sample etc etc
What do you think?
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Mar 27 2015 11:38am
This isn't really my style of music, so I won't comment on the stylistic aspect of it too much – it would be too uninformed. However, I do enjoy making what might be considered progressive trance, so it's definitely related in a lot of ways. Though, definitely some key differences.

I dig the Alan Watts samples. Not sure if I'd recommend sidechain compressing them to the kick though, if that's what you meant though. Think they might be harder to hear that way, but that's a stylistic choice I guess. They could use a bit of EQ love just so they cut through the mix a little more, though.

Sounds like a pretty finished song, composition-wise, so that's a good thing. Reminds me of being young, on a beach or something. Halcyon days, or something like that. I like the portamento lead, it's pretty soothing.

Again, sort of bordering on a stylistic comment, but I think around 1:15 that transition feels a little hesitant or something. I might suggest trying to cut out like a bar, or half a bar, or even a quarter of one there just to increase the impact the kick has when it hits in. Just food for thought, you're the artist.

Overall, sounds pretty good for what I know of this style of music. Finalize the mix and master that baby!
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Mar 27 2015 12:06pm
sry for being unclear about the sidechaining xD I ment it by sidechaining it to the synths around just to get it more clear, I find it abit hard to hear at some points ..

Yeah I wasnt sure about the transition, will need another look on that later .. thx for your reply :)
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Mar 30 2015 12:07pm
I wouldn't suggest sidechaining to anything except to the kick... MAYBE possible a snare. I will have a listen when I get back to the studio later and let you know.
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Apr 3 2015 05:19am
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Apr 3 2015 01:35pm
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Why would you sidechain something that isn't clear? It'll just make it even quieter when it clashes with whatever you sidechain it to.

If it's quiet, try fixing it with eq. I sidechain to my kicks because it pumps that way.

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Apr 4 2015 05:10am
well, if I sidechained the synths to the voice sample it might work, haven't got time to test it out though. Already gave it a EQ boost at ~ 8khz.
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well, if I sidechained the synths to the voice sample it might work, haven't got time to test it out though. Already gave it a EQ boost at ~ 8khz.


Yeah I guess doing it the other way around would work in a way. This is something that would take some time to mess with before getting it perfect no doubt.

e/ did you take the track down?

This post was edited by carmelhockey on Apr 6 2015 01:40pm
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