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PedroSanchez
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Sep 13 2014 09:58pm
Hi me and my friends are doing music and we need some feedback on our song, we may add up some lyrics and vocals by the end of the year, but for now we are doing alot of house, dubstep music, willing to do rap soon.
here is our youtube page :
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCQ8eIXRkLJtUi5hE13fLSMg
our soundcloud :
https://soundcloud.com/htea
and our facebook page :
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Htea/1477612835784566
our newest song is :
we would like some feedbacks to improve our music thanks guys and hope you sub or like it!
also here my friend's channel, he is posting some sick mix:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC7zrH04Bu7TqjYmU32UQ7uw
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Sep 14 2014 04:03pm
well it's nice, maybe you need some more "energical" parts
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Sep 17 2014 06:05pm
Quote (DarkTigger @ Sep 14 2014 06:03pm)
well it's nice, maybe you need some more "energical" parts
yeah thanks, we are working on that recently and we are trying to put on some vocals too. but yeah thanks for your coment, really appreciate
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Sep 21 2014 07:49am
another song we made a bit slower:
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Sep 30 2014 07:54pm
a longer song we made months ago,a progressive house.
https://soundcloud.com/htea/atlantis
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Oct 8 2014 03:49pm
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Oct 8 2014 07:49pm
Imo, it could hit harder if you would build it more. Don't forget rests and dynamics, it sounds like a lot of it is the same volume the whole time, and you just add in a few instruments now and then to increase the level and drop them back out again to get a little quieter. Work on finding what the melody/main tag is in each song, then have that highlighted through dynamics, call/response, and occasionally having it drop out completely and delay its downbeat a little.
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Nov 8 2014 11:54pm
new song:
https://soundcloud.com/htea/htea-modesty
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Nov 9 2014 08:18pm
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Nov 13 2014 12:48am
Quote (PedroSanchez @ Nov 9 2014 07:18pm)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MMA2uS0MO20
This one is sick
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