Singing is awful, there is no power in the notes sung and you can hear the singer's voice shake trying to hold the notes.

Beat in the background is just a standard 'make on my laptop equipment' beat.

Song doesn't strike me as about anything in particular or conveying any message.

Wouldn't rate it very highly

thank you for the detailed input.
not just "i like it" or "trash"

up

trash here

Vocal too much out of tune to be acceptable, specially the chorus.

I would make the song on 3-4 chords on acoustic guitar or piano until you have better control on your voice, don't put too much energy on instrumental until then

The music is ok, the beat quality sound would be my 2nd concern

No comment on lyrics, i am not very good in english obv




This post was edited by 2sexy4u on Aug 13 2014 08:22pm

i thought it was ironic song ^^

it seems like "fake dance love song" :/

not really digging it thats just me i guess favorite part was the white chick prolly your favorite part too