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Jul 3 2014 08:17am
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Come on, lets go
lets just hit the road
don’t hesitate for a second
everyone will be cold (so cold)
but they’ll get over it

lets just start a fairy tale
starring you and me
we can go, go set sail
and drift away in the sea

we can start our life together
break away from this tether
we can be happy-together
we can go wherever forever
(together, forever)

[CHORUS]
So lets sail away,
before the sunrise-
we can say our goodbyes
before this voyage
of you and me
We both know time flies
and soon our dreams
will be the only thing, left to follow
so lets go
(lets go, lets go, lets go)
[Chorus]

this will be our last goodbye
to the life we know and live
we’ll start a new sunrise
it will just be you and I

[CHORUS]
So lets sail away,
before the sunrise-
we can say our goodbyes
before this voyage
of you and me
We both know time flies
and soon our dreams
will be the only thing, left to follow
so lets go
(lets go, lets go, lets go)
[Chorus]

I’m not saying we should forget the past
but we should live for the moment
this could be our last chance
lets make the best of it

nobody can stop us now
we have come to far
lets prove them wrong
and live life our way
we will live another day

this is our final shot
whether we fail or not
at least we know we tried our best
we can forget all the rest

[CHORUS]
So lets sail away,
before the sunrise-
we can say our goodbyes
before this voyage
of you and me
We both know time flies
and soon our dreams
will be the only thing, left to follow
so lets go
(lets go, lets go, lets go)
[Chorus]


I'll follow up and post the acoustic song when we get it uploaded this weekend.

any sort of comment/criticism will be nice :) (the song is in the process of being recorded completely so criticism would be nice for tweaking it. We are not redoing the entire song from scratch and such)

I also know, reading lyrics can be hard when you don't have the beat in mind of the writer. So bare with me until I can actually post it.
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Jul 3 2014 04:03pm
Like you said it's difficult to judge because you judge lyrics on how it fits with the style and mood of the music.

Honest assessment, I'd say it's pretty cheesy, but chorus seems the strongest
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Jul 3 2014 07:31pm
I'd love to hear the song.. but the lyrics are a little shallow and leave me somewhat unfilled musically.
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Jul 4 2014 08:27am
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Like you said it's difficult to judge because you judge lyrics on how it fits with the style and mood of the music.

Honest assessment, I'd say it's pretty cheesy, but chorus seems the strongest


It's pop punk so is sadly ment to be cheesy :P

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I'd love to hear the song..  but the lyrics are a little shallow and leave me somewhat unfilled musically.


Thank you both for your input though :) a couple more days and we will post it
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