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yea?
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Dec 15 2013 08:52pm
I think my main criticism is in the sounds and production quality, the sweeps and builds need some work but all that shit comes with practice. The form and idea are pretty good though, sounding awesome is a bi-product of experience producing. Is this you? If so just keep doing it.
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Dec 16 2013 05:38pm
this sounds similar to the first few months i was starting to get into music production
this is pretty much now: http://soundcloud.com/kuchesezik/myfirstrealtrack even though it's over 3 years old, about 5-6 years into music production and a year or so into house (not mtv house)
it takes time and patience, you need to become used to the elements, forms, arrangements, mixing, instrument choice etc, in the meantime you must have your ears open and be able to understand what you hear and how it is composed. if you don't listen to music (in its progression from classical to contemporary), you won't get far and it will just be a pastime, gl
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Dec 29 2013 08:26pm
couldnt get song workin

This post was edited by EvO-Endo on Dec 29 2013 08:26pm
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Quote (Harvey @ Dec 15 2013 09:52pm)
I think my main criticism is in the sounds and production quality, the sweeps and builds need some work but all that shit comes with practice. The form and idea are pretty good though, sounding awesome is a bi-product of experience producing. Is this you? If so just keep doing it.


Sound design is something with which I'm quite a novice. I have a good amount of music background. Thanks for the response, and I'll keep working at it!

Quote (glupaka @ Dec 16 2013 06:38pm)
this sounds similar to the first few months i was starting to get into music production
this is pretty much now: http://soundcloud.com/kuchesezik/myfirstrealtrack even though it's over 3 years old, about 5-6 years into music production and a year or so into house (not mtv house)
it takes time and patience, you need to become used to the elements, forms, arrangements, mixing, instrument choice etc, in the meantime you must have your ears open and be able to understand what you hear and how it is composed. if you don't listen to music (in its progression from classical to contemporary), you won't get far and it will just be a pastime, gl


Thanks for the words - much appreciated and great advice for anyone.

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couldnt get song workin


https://soundcloud.com/nksarraf/space-time-continuum

Give this a try, I finally published it.
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Jan 8 2014 11:46am
Your sound development is getting better, maybe just work on your song structure first, I have a hard time following what is going on with the random transitions.
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