I greatly appreciate any views and/or criticism, and if you actually happen to like it show some support with a like or even try to spread the video to others you know.
I know the quality is not too great, but I'm getting good recording equipment soon.

One more today:

you have the flow
you have the voice
hopefully you get better equipment like you said you will.
only thing is you sound constipated, like you were shy or unsure about what your rapping
as i said, you have the flow and the voice, just rap harder on the track and you have something going on

dont give up