Quote (Automatica @ May 29 2012 06:47pm)
woops, here it is
http://soundcloud.com/letsforgetyesterday/save-your-lifefor realz lol
I played guitar/bass and worked on a good portion of the drums as well, I also am the one who recorded and mixed it, but am still in the process of learning to properly bring out the best in a mix.
A really good tip that I got for rock/metal style music that is like that. During chorus and louder parts in the song, make the vocals just loud enough to hear what your saying and it will make the mix ALOT more exciting.
When it sounds like the vocals are trying to push through this heavy guitar and pounding drums it just has this magical effect on the mix.
But it sounded really good from what I heard. Alot better than most people I hear on here, and I'm not even into metal lol
Some lyrics things I noticed that didn't really sound professional though. Like "I wanna take off your clothes". It just sounds uncreative and sounds like the first thing that popped into the writers mind. Also sonds like a 16 year old wrote it lol
I'm sure there is a better line you could use instead of those type of comments.