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Feb 5 2012 12:55pm
Well I'v written these over the past couple of weeks, Honestly I don't try its usually out of a rage lmfao, But! when i do write them its like 2-3 minutes each time. Words just flow cause i like to rhyme. Just wondering what yall think about my lines.

Dam I'm spent, if you ain't know what i meant,
its just time to vent. Snow coming down but up with the rent.
Getting close to an intense repent,
maybe ill throw it on my list for lent.
Just kidding, don't play me or you'll be spinning,
when i say fuck with the sinning and keep on winning.
Reek havoc on this grinning,
depression lurks in this underground thinking,
thunder rocking back the eyes and blinking,
to many lies, causing this ship to be sinking.
Gotta lip? bitch at me you'll be picking up teeth that are missing,
underestimate me? I'll have you moaning pain intently,
when soon I jump up in my Bentley.
Cause ill use this for some flow increase hastily
. Money don't grow on trees, but its just as tasty


Straight down the barrel, 9 rounds,
hate induced to the pin point while we tear a hole based on this Christmas carol.
Veins grow narrow as we clash in the morning its terrible,
but I know that this is spare-able. Just need to show that there's another variable,
but listen I don't care at all when haters try to make the call.
Say it again, trust me your face ' l be through that bathroom stall,
thinking tall , now look at you crawl and I'm having a ball,
cause you bothered the wrong person and now I broke your skull.
Take a second, think about what your doing cause I recon that your losing
, with that fatal bruising, its confusing and now its vital, clown, rip that frown
pissed now, suck it up cause I'm about to get loud.
If I want to just fly through the clouds i do,
and confident through the crowds cause I am my own fuel
, spew the lines through the lips rhyme and skip the odd fine time I rip prime
, rhythm lets you climb to the endless concentration that you can define.
From your toes up the spine it climbs now its time to shine once I get the right vibe,
now be ready to hide cause this beast is now released and reaching at an all time high.


Smack dab in the middle
looking at bitches smoking crack while i am in my lab writing riddles,
fighting the urge to fiddle as I rip my pack of skittles just to get a little
sugar, rush in to the top, plop now your on the bottom,
self control while you chug your bottle.
Skipped a sign now the foots on the throttle,
Ripped a line now your laid out on the floor singing lullaby's while you die,
cause you thought you were just getting high.
Misdirection at its best, with all that potential you let just fly to rest
no way back cause your messed,
sick to death of the life that you left,
thirsty for knowledge but look now just full of disrespect,
showing nothing but life that failed the test.


This post was edited by SchizoRH on Feb 5 2012 01:08pm
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Feb 5 2012 01:07pm
Mad incentive to be inventive, sensitive to the way i live,

primitive to protect my crib,

where people need to step down if they know what there dealing with,

black smith, using more then fifth, concluding with the sixth,

with an intuitive mix, mind power 'll do the trick,

while you crave your fix, straight proven on his shit list,

not on Santa's Christmas list, because its priceless,

and hes righteous I'm decisive.

I use insane herbs and spices.

The point to this rhyme is, nothing why not write music,

when you read this does your mind make a beat with it.

Cause when i relay, the beat, its automatic.

clear mind no static, just like magic. Its logic,

spaced out in your brain, stretchy like an elastic,

reduced and dusty like an attic,

why not use it instead of being an addict.

Full of new tactics, whats the point of getting sick when its a mental transaction.

Addiction, just an experience of rational decision, misdirected passion.

Now I've turned this into rhythm, flash I'm gone,

upside down but fully loaded with creative power just imaged son,

flow ain't stop so soon i'm gonna have the cash on.

Fear breaks you loose unless kept in your palm, mental state of calm,

so keep it strong, nothing wrong with ripping a dope rap, but i still call it a song.


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Feb 5 2012 01:50pm
If you want a specific rap written for you, I guess I can do that :P, just give me a topic and ill see what i can do. Its free, but accept donations!

I write free raps,

Quicker then you trying to use a map to find your way to take a crap.
I'm not black, i'm white like rice paper,
I vaporize weed like darth vadar.
I'm not a skater, just a nerd that hates these haters.
Dont need to masturbate, cause imma do my girlfriend later.
Ticked off all the time cause i hate my *uckin neighbour.
For some reason i enjoy hard labour and one day almost was eatin by an alligator.
Beatin by an asshole who will soon meet his maker.
But if you down with what i throw arround, be my friend or fan i'm not no poser,
but character round but built like one tough ass defeater.
I aint elite, but i sit here in my seat rappin quicker then a speed demon.
Freestyle my way to the top to redeem my con attitude as it seems,
but fate will catch you if you dare cause shit on my street.
Not sure where this is going, but you see what i mean.


This post was edited by SchizoRH on Feb 5 2012 02:01pm
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Feb 5 2012 03:30pm
are you black?
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Feb 5 2012 03:40pm
I clearly state im not black, im white like rice paper. In one of them if you seen it? lmfao!
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Feb 5 2012 04:57pm
Example
Five F.G Bin @ that P 30 MF Nagel,
I've gotta find myself some items to snaggle,
I'm fo real, foshizzle I rap all day its off the hizzle.
I'm no poser i just enjoy this and smoke a couple joints to keep me going.
No Joke though hook me with that Nagel, while I go snag myself a Bagel

And cream cheese...... so message me, game name please, So please assist thy master Schiz

Example 2

Yo we got mule 1, mule 2 , mule 3 , to mule 5,
buy up this mans stuff cause this party's about to thrive,
smile for the camera cause its just about time,
that we come up in here and drop a dope as rhyme.
Drinks up, rum and coke until we die.
By the way man, i'd like two 'SoJ' to go at 5fg
per pop please im hardly on my feet
No jokes, this trade list is elite, cause im the criminal sneak behind the scenes
id also like that 244/20 raven at 15fg, for a 25 total count Mr. Vaiav!

This post was edited by SchizoRH on Feb 5 2012 05:11pm
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Feb 5 2012 05:08pm
u high?
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Feb 5 2012 05:12pm
Quote (vaiav @ Feb 5 2012 07:08pm)
u high?


Actually, iv bin sober for a week, would kill for a puff right now :S, this is just the withdrawls talkin maha!
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Feb 5 2012 05:44pm
Just another Example

Smurf Tits, I remember you,
You sold me those runes yesterday that I threw up
in my runeword in the wrong order,
I must have some dam dyslexic disorder
failed hard and this free bump is for free, obviously
almost broke now, but let me be, i just like to rap so let me see
I vouche this guy cause hes got the runes you need,
Sober as hell right now, don't like it wish i had some green
Don't deem me a stoner
just cause i can see things in a different persona
Im not a loner, but love to drink corona
Good luck man I hope this puts you up
On the trade list, cause that 4 hour bump thing
really sucks when you need to trade shit!
GL sellin cause those HR's will fill the sockets in my grill!
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Feb 5 2012 06:01pm
Here is a free bump for that dope 6/6/4 Call to Arms
The overseer Master Schiz is rippin rhymes across this list
When im done ill rip my sixty four, a Brawls breakin out, so sound the alarm
Flow fit together in ways that I cant disarm, Living out here on a barn, bored as hell
just trying to help people sell, but just know that Karm-a got my back, Farm-a sack of oats so food I never Lack
Filling each bracket step by step, just sack it, connect arm to arm. Buy this CTA cause its so sick it will send you ti the clinic
Im not sure if I win, but if you rap bring it. Bumps for free if I can sing it. So make sure you sling this, before I ring in hits!
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