you sound like you're a little unaccustomed to the music. the guitar, most notably the intro, sounds a bit shaky. it's all the right notes, but they don't quite connect as seamlessly as they could.
that being said, you have everything down. technically speaking, there are no mistakes and you have a very pleasant singing tone. even here though, it sounds a bit unaccustomed to the music; try to really bring the song to yourself and get really comfortable.
cheers.
This post was edited by Giveuptheghost on Nov 3 2011 07:26pm