I am going to try to say this in a non offensive way (not a good start) but anytime I see you post videos I am curious but within around 3 seconds I usually stop it and go back to the index.

Did you enjoy your own song after recording, and did you find accurate?
First off, even the guitar strumming and chord progression are kind of boring. I would have worked much much more on the instrumental.

Then comes the vocal part... I'm a guitar player but I love to sing, even if i know my voice is fucking ugly. I started to cover songs more and more. Even if my voice is still ugly, listening to all what I recorded, I saw progression and that's what keeps me going.
The best way would be to get a singing teacher, but eh ...
Progression is the key.

Don't show any of your work until you think that people will love it and say wow!

Keep it going:)

I Like it

yeah i enjoyed it but it was just a throw together... i do the real song on condenser mics and such with an actual dedicated tascam multi track... for youtube i just want a rough sound that i get all my ideas down on / have a little fun with it