Im writing a song about me and my girl splitting up and im looking for a sad, but catchy progression

Heres what i got: http://www.purevolume.com/NickStultz

Obv. Repeats itself I've been playing for about 5 maybe 6 years, but im new to making my own shit, judge lightly.

it's about average

can't say much else until you put it all together...chord progressions are always relatively unoriginal out of context

i will say it captures the mood you're shooting for

This post was edited by Derkaderk on May 1 2011 08:06pm

Thanks buddy

The recording sounds really rough. Its really hard to hear what your playing clearly.

But the chords I can hear are Em G and C. Is that all of them?

If I could hear your recording more clearly I could give sufficient feedback, but its just really hard to hear.