the first verse to a song i started like an hour ago lmk how u think its going

Temptation
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AFmZt3o7ahQ

This post was edited by Zinaga on Mar 29 2011 09:10am

bump

At first I was sure it was gonna be some crap, but its pretty cool honestly
If Chris Brown was singing this it would have gotten ++ views.
Yeah the instrumental is 9/10, the riff is catchy
the backvocals are epic
but the singing is baah

7/10 overall

One tip: Shorten the song.
(3mins max)

Keep on playing!

Agreed this was cool.You should make more stuff like this and try and promote it around youtube and people you know through facebook.

I think the singing vocals need to be louder and/or mastered differently so they stand out more.

I give it 8/10