http://www.thesixtyone.com/s/5uqyefpC9VW/I need some critisism so let me know what ya think
I'm alrdy going to redo the intro and add a second vocals track to the louder parts of the song. So other than that let me know what needs to be done.
Lyrics and their meanings:
Your hope is ice in the breathe of march today (You have little hope, Ice doesn't flourish too well in the spring)
As for me when I speak the things that I won't say (and my problem is I don't speak my mind)
And I can tell theres strength in you my dear
And as I can see, God's given you something here
Though I walse through the valley of the shadow of my death
I shall fear no evil unto my last breathe
As I can tell God's given me something here
And As I can see He loves me so dear
He's my rock and fortress he delivers me from my enemy
I shalt fear the terror in the night or the destruction at noonday
I can tell your more than a conquerer in him
And Can't you see I've not come to deter
The seasons of life are the flipside of your pillow (each new season of life being cool and refreshing)
Winter to summer, Pine to Wilow (pine lives in winter and willows don't)
Leaves will fall with every change (in life you must let go of some things because they will be gone eventually)
You must adjust to new sprouts gain (you must adjust to the new generations and how they talk and do things to be a part of it)
Ive have come and come to save
So don't reject a mortals praise
It has alot of peotic lyrics, because I love poetry.