I need some critisism on this

please let me know what you guys think

need opinions, tips and advice.

Oh and its not done yet, I'm going to put violin in it before its done

cmon guys, 10 views an not even 1 comment.. give me a break

help me out and leave me some feedback

hm, isn't working for me.

dang. thats lame

yea, it's not working at all. upload it to youtube

guess i will when its done

heyy... I was bored today and got this to work... you have to be a member (and signed in) of that recording review site in order for them to give you access to the song.

Neat song. It's not exactly my style, so I have no criticism about specific stuff... the only thing I would suggest is maybe dampering the keyboard a little bit... maybe some type of light synth or something (it's too "in your face" in some parts imo).

Ya people told me this and I agreed.

I actually editted it up some more according to some critisism and I put some violin in it as well.

It sounds alot better now. But now im thinking maybe I should just take out the keyboard during the softer vocal parts and leave it during the chorus and such.

And thank you very much for taking your time to sign up and listen.

This post was edited by weasleface on Feb 12 2011 03:59pm

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