Made a song on FL Studio and was wondering if I could get some feedback on it =o

This is the first song I've made so don't hate too much =P



Thanks!

Ok, I will offer some constructive criticism. The song starts off decent, but the melody using the synths, pads, and bells (or bottles, whatever it is) beginning at :40 and 1:43 and ending around 1:05 and 1:50 really doesn't fit the beat very well. To fix this, I would suggest making a much faster melody using different instruments to make the overall song more intense because the melody there seems a little too slow for the tempo. Overall, this isn't a bad first effort; I would just pick instruments that fit the atmosphere of the song a little better.

=O I see what you mean, yeah that makes sense. Thanks much ofc =P its appreciated

Dudecow long time no see

Hey man =O how you been?

Good intro, but yhea the melody doesnt really fit. Find a decent instrumental melody and it will be really cool.

eh, im actually repeating what Gryph said cuz hes right

Ty for your input though ofc =P

iso


hi hats
Snare or clap

build up


very good for you first song tho

Thanks =D, and yeah I've had things like build up and snares/claps in mind for my next song

:26-40 is fucking sick imo.