0/10

Please, only open minded people. State why you chose the rating you did.

I don't want to hear anything like Rap sucks, first of all this is Hip-Hop.
Second of all, you're closed minded.

this you? I posted some shit rap/hip-hop nobody every really listens unless you are playing a quitar with no vocals at all. its cool, needs work. vocal input needs turned down a hair it peaks a little.

edit: also I hit it with an 8 I feel it needs more punch lines.. and rhymes were a little simple.

edit 2: here is some of my shit some old some new http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/2653045

This post was edited by monsta816 on May 14 2010 01:42pm

Thanks, very constructive criticism. This is me(the vocals)...This song's lyrics were a little old, though I still felt it was a very good song so I had to re-record it into better quality then what it was at.

I will update my youtube soon, just very busy.

Thanks again though

it had a nice story. and I would have used them as well had I wrote them I have some old shit I think is good (its not to my full potential now) but still nice that I will redo soon.

Yeah, I usually don't use many metaphors in my story-mode raps. I'd like to keep it simple and straight to the point, most people don't understand the metaphor part about Hip-Hop.

I completely understand but its to each his own. I like a clever punch line here and there. metaphores are nice to. I was just lookin for the punch lines. keep at it though.

Thanks, you should check out "Bars"
(on my videos)

This post was edited by S.t.a.s.h on May 14 2010 01:56pm

link? ill check it

nvm found it

Thats clean I like it.

This post was edited by monsta816 on May 14 2010 02:02pm

Thanks

beat sounds cool, rapping sounds like "douche bag" rap genre sorry

also, the actual recording of the singing is pretty poor^^