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Jan 13 2010 04:21am
this is an outlaw country kind of song, please if your not into this type of music please don't criticize me on that.

Let me know if I should add a verse? give me some idea's? You show me a verse that should go in?

Well I don’t know why I do these things to myself..
Running my body to the ground and wrecking my health..
And the more that I drink the more that I seem to find..
I’m just driving nails in my coffin one at a time..
I’m just driving nails in my coffin and I’m the one to blame..
I’m just driving nails in my coffin, ain’t got a nickel to my name
And I’m trying to quit this habit of mine..
I’m just driving nails in my coffin one at a time.
Some nights I don’t remember I don’t remember ever driving home
I was high on the bottle and way too damn stoned..
And the one that I loved soon ran away and
I’m just driving nails in my coffin one at a time
I’m just driving nails in my coffin and I’m the one to blame
I’m just driving nails in my coffin, aint got a nickel to my name
I’m I’m trying to quit this habit of mine..
I’m just driving nails in my coffin one at a time.
Sometimes I think my drinking will leave me all alone
I wonder what it’d be like if I just stayed at home
Now I don’t got a job, a house, or a wife
I guess I’ll ill be a loner the rest of my life
I’m just driving nails in my coffin one at a time
I’m just driving nails in my coffin and I’m the one to blame
I’m just driving nails in my coffin, aint got a nickel to my name
And I’m trying to quit this habit of mine..
I’m just driving nails in my coffin one at a time.





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Jan 13 2010 01:53pm
Too much word repeating.
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