http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzqkVtnm45c


I was bored, so I made it in one day. x/10. 10 being the best.

This post was edited by Akpaloli on Jan 4 2010 06:06pm

6/10

Drumming is a bit boring. -.5

Progressions are repetitive -1

Guitar solo 1 was okay, the acoustic solo was kind of out of place. -.5

Decent for doing all the instruments in 1 day.

Is there even bass? If so I can barely hear it and it doesn't do anything interesting. That alone is -2

Okay, thanks! I'll keep that all of that in mind when I do my next song.

1:08 that transition is brutal, this bridge/pre-chorus needs a bridge itself ^^ (acoustic guitar chords)
1:52 is out of key (acoustic guitar solo)

Keyboard's part should have been played by/with a guitar though

It's still a nice attempt and there's some creativity
Keep it up
6/10

This post was edited by tOrF on Jan 5 2010 06:56am

Thanks for the input :). Do you mean brutal in a good or a bad way? I know what you mean about how I just jumped into the pre-chorus though.
I guess the acoustic solo was a bad idea, lol. I just put it in because I needed something to put there. (I don't like it either, haha!)

This post was edited by Akpaloli on Jan 5 2010 05:20pm