This was made in a few minutes.
I'd like to hear it sounding like a Tool song, because I see many meaning that it can have to it.
Main one I had in mind when writing it though was how we give in to pressure and let others influence everything about us (Refresh my mind with your gravitational notions).
The last verse is about overcoming it.


We all feel like
We can't do nothin'
We all feel like
A tragedy's comin'

Through the eyes another
Through the eyes of the ones that live longer
Comin' in, like a tidal wave
Bringin' me down like I've got to change

Clear away my sanity with your potions
Refresh my mind with your gravitational notions
Feed my fire with your guilty lies
See the world through my eyes

Ferocity never looked so calm
See through your words branded in my arms
Who the hell was I to tell you otherwise
We can't deny that we're blind to lies


Opinions?

not to bad

Thanks.

Iso: More opinions.
28 views and only 1 reply?

continue like that it's not bad for only few minutes lol ;P

Who the hell am I?

I give them a 5/5.

for few minutes yea

( think about it if he would took like one hour )

This post was edited by muzik77 on Dec 28 2009 08:17pm

Thanks for the great feedback
Always thought my friends were just being nice when they said my lyrics are good haha.

Added new verse.

he wants it past tense bro..