the song is about the transition period between winter and spring and how you experience it around you.
its a small part of a song im making now, this part is played in F minor mostly.



go down the river
and see for yourselves
the wakened songbird shivers
ices are not melt

protruding through the white sheet
thistles come to meet you
not explained or understood
the warming sun greets you

specialliced and quickly ruptured
branches' blossom shun
some deformed but most are straightened
bent cut formed and turned

windstorms dark fields snow afflictions
godly earth returned
transition of the seasons
all your feelings burn

What genre of music are these lyrics for?

totaly forgot to say that, ehm its purely accoustic guitar so far.

pretty neat

They're pretty good, man. Not really my style, but it works for you I'm sure, keep up the good work =) Some day it'll be a hit song I'm sure

They sound awkward as hell.

The ices. They are not melt.

end sentence sucks though cos i want to give the feeling of being empty like after meditation or something and ur all full of a relaxing nothingness, not being ablaze with feelings..gotta change that..
and besides that it sounds very generic

anyhow thanks for ratings

Rofl! =)

are these joke lyrics? or are you a 70 yr old folk singer perhaps with problems with english?